Naoaki

[Naoaki]

Basics

Name: Naoaki 'Toda' Hazune

Nicknames: Giant,

Age: Sixteen.

Birthday: January 19th.

Grade: 10th.

Power: 



Member Group: Prefect.

Canon or not: Not.

Appearance: It'd make the most sense to start with his body, he stands at a surprisingly large stature, six foot ten inches if you want to be exact about it. His skin color is very pale, never having been another color before. All his life it'd been that tone of porcelain, only every now and then differing in shades lighter and darker than the one he normally wore due to sun exposure or lack thereof, respectively. Toda's skin is very soft, he seems to take good care of himself either way, he doesn't have ashen-colored elbows or anything of the sort. His body is not bulky, nor too muscular, if anything he has a lean athletic build. Both his arms and legs are lean, and he doesn't seem to have too much fat on his body, as expected of someone weighing in at about 208lbs. His abdominal muscles form a six pack as well.


His hair, though a peculiar shade of lavender, seems to be obscure, save for its impressive length. His flowing samsonian hair goes down to a few inches below his shoulders and is less kept the further down it reaches. The texture of the straight locks is soft and silken. The color of his eyes is reminiscent of a stormy violet, much brighter than the deep  of most humans, with little else special of note about it. Toda's facial structure is slim, with sharp cheekbones, and overall he considers himself an attractive man.

Personality

Overall Personality: At least 3 paragraphs

Likes:

Dislikes:

Fears:

Strengths(Should be mix of Personality, psychical and mental):

Weaknesses(Should be mix of Personality, psychical and mental):

Goals:

History

Family Members/guardians:

History: at least three paragraphs

Behind the Character

Name: Nao, Genocide, Geno, Cide, I don't care really.

Chatango Name: Genocide.

RP Experience: Five years.

How did you find us?: Don't really remember.

RP Sample: at least 2 paragraphs, can be from another site. Required for first app

[Professor Blitzy]

DENIED
I know you're not done yet but your powers are simply not acceptable. Firstly; that's way too many powers to start out with as a beginner to the site. Powers can be strengthened over time and abilities can be gained the same way, through posting.

Secondly; your character has little to no limits. This is considered overpowered and not acceptable under any circumstances. Every single character must have limits and consequences for their powers. I can pretty much use every power/ability you listed as an example of little to no limits, physical or mental, whatsoever.

Thirdly; the powers. The maximum any character is allowed to have, beginner or not, is three. Only three. This does not include abilities that the character can gain from that power, but this has to be a reasonable number. As far as I can tell, Naoaki's power is solely Taolin Tai Chi. Under this power there are eight powerful abilities. I don't know if "chi crafting" and "musical tai chi" are additional powers are just more abilities, but again they are extremely overpowered to start with.

Lastly; I'm not 100% on what you meant by "he is at actual magic," but as a general rule we try to stay away from magical powers here. As for his "technical immortality," that is a no go under all circumstances. Immortality is strictly forbidden in any and all forms.

You may revise your application in order to follow our rules and guidelines, but as it is now the character is denied.