Post by Headmistress Kayla on Sept 2, 2012 21:23:52 GMT -5
Okay here I go, wish me luck and I can't wait to see what advice you all have for me. If you're wondering, it's for Cali when she finds Kyle cheating on her.
Okay~ There we go! Constructive Criticism is very much appreciated.
A certain dark-haired freshman couldn't help the smile that tugged at her lips or the faint color that stained her porcelain cheeks. Today was a special occassion after all, it was their anniversary. One month, it's been one wonderful month. Most would say that one month was nothing, but when it was your first boyfriend, everything meant the world to you. In her hands was a small blue box, tied with a silver bow. A giggle escaped her lips as she searched for a certain sixteen-year-old male. He had absolutely no clue she was coming to see him today
She stopped in her tracks for a brief moment, opening the case to ensure its contents were still safe. Inside the box was a beautiful silver watch with navy decals. Engraved onto the back were those three worlds, those three short yet, powerful words that had the power to change lives forever. I love you.
It may have been too soon and Seth may not have agreed but, she knew exactly how she felt. In her world of lies and covers, she had been herself with Kyle, something that was normally only reserved for her beloved brother.
Someone had said they saw Kyle out in the courtyard, which was where Calista now stood. Shutting the box, she continued to weave her way through the students. Where was he? Finally, he came into view. He was talking to someone, that mischievous grin displayed so proudly on his handsome face. However, as Calista drew near, her smile faded away.
Who was that girl? That beautiful blonde at his side? She wanted to run to him, to demand what he was doing, why he had his arm around her, but her feet felt like concrete blocks. The noise of the chattering students became silence, their faces blurring and all Calista could see was them. The way Kyle looked at the girl, it was the same way he looked at her. A smile tugged his lips forward and he slowly began to lean in. Her heart pounded rapidly in her ears and her breath caught in her throat. Slowly, he collided his lips with hers.
There was one coherent thought in Cailsta's mind...why? She stumbled forward, forcing her body to move To respond. To do something other than gawk. She launched herself towards them, skidding into a stop before the two. Kyle slowly broke his kiss and his eyes locked with hers; there wasn't a single trace of emotion on his face. No regret, no shocked expression at being caught, just that same cold gaze he gave the rest of the world. Like she was just another person...
Her body began to shake as her hand slowly rose upward. Slap. The audible sound of skin against skin. The sharp feeling rushed up her numb arm as she stared at his now reddening face.
"How could you..." Her present to him dropped to the hard ground as she turned and ran. She pushed herself as far and as hard as she could, straining her legs to just get away. Tears streamed down her cheeks, her heart shattering to pieces. How could he?
Okay~ There we go! Constructive Criticism is very much appreciated.